Yesterday was Walt Whitman's Birthday. I love his Leaves of Grass. My favorite poem in that book is A Child went "Forth. In the poem he describes all the things that a child encounters during a cay and how those things all become a part of him.
It always takes me back to when I taught Kindergarten. Each thing those kids did each day became part of them. In fact, when you stop to think about it, everything that we come in contact each day also becomes a part of us. The way we thin,k the way we react to scents and sounds, etc.
A few years ago,I took a class in creative writing with a group of kids that had just graduated from high school. I wasn't sure how they would react to an older woman in their class, but not to worry. We had a blast and I really enjoyed it. Our instructor asked us to pick one of our favorite poets and write a poem using his or her style. I would like to share the poem I wrote using A child went Forth as the style I chose.
An old woman went out every day
and each thing she saw, that thing she became,
and that thing became part of her for the day
or a certain part of
the day or for many years, or styretching' \
cycles of years.
The misting pond b became a part
of this woman,
and ducks, and brown and orange lilies, and
brown and
orange leaves, and the whistle of
the meadow lark,
and the eight-month corn, and the tomatoes'
red shining skins,
and the green-bean vines, and the
verdant cukes
and the abundant harvest of the field, or in the
kitchen garden.
And the ants, trudging slowly
through there, and
the rich, moist earth,
and the wiggling worms with their long, thin
forms all became a part of her.
The school books of ninth-month and tenth
month became a part of her.
Osmiroid-lettering pens, and
black ink and the
parchment paper in profusion, and the paint
post filled with color and the
pictures afterward.
And note-books, and the simplest pencils in
their box,
and the young girl of aubergine-hair
and rose tattoo,
drawing pictures on the chalk board, and the
boy that swaggered past on
his way to the library,
and the happy girls that past
and the lonely girls,
and the tall word-wise professor, and the
colorful art instructor, and the new
attitude in both school and public
wherever she went.
This became a part of that old woman who
went out every day, and who
now becomes, and will always
become every day.
Thanks Walt
So, until next time
Be Kind to One-Another
Joyce
I love, love, love your poem, Joyce! It's wonderful. I am a fan of Walt Whitman and have the book, Leaves of Grass. His poems are so real, so earthy. The simplest ones contain such a beautiful, profound message. He wrote about the joy and wonder in simple, everyday things.
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